Fallen Angels

The blood rains down this gloomy day
The angel whispers upon my face
Her halo crumbled to the fiery pits
below The heavens rumbled and 
screamed as the devil arose
He grasped her wings she wimpered 
and cried knowing that hell was 
coming alive The tears streamed down her
face as she fell from grace never to return      
her wings would surely burn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 9:31 AM
VERY DRAMATIC! Thank you for sharing this feature of the week, Trisha. Lainie
Gideon Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 5:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry. I find it very very imaginative.It really deserves to be featured. Gidds
Fraser Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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October 18, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Trisha. Love, Carol
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October 13, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Very beautiful poetry,nicely written and good description and words. Best wishes Chacko
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Trisha. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Powerful and filled with emotion....Great work! ~ Carrie
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October 12, 2009 at 3:38 PM
wow,i think this is one of the best poems ive read on here :-) wonderful choice of words keep um comming and welcome to poetrysoup happy to have you peace and love,Jon
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