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Fallen Angels

The blood rains down this gloomy day The angel whispers upon my face Her halo crumbled to the fiery pits below The heavens rumbled and screamed as the devil arose He grasped her wings she wimpered and cried knowing that hell was coming alive The tears streamed down her face as she fell from grace never to return her wings would surely burn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/23/2009 9:31:00 AM
VERY DRAMATIC! Thank you for sharing this feature of the week, Trisha. Lainie
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Date: 10/23/2009 5:00:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry. I find it very very imaginative.It really deserves to be featured. Gidds
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Trisha. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2009 1:29:00 PM
Very beautiful poetry,nicely written and good description and words. Best wishes Chacko
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Date: 10/13/2009 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Trisha. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2009 4:14:00 PM
Powerful and filled with emotion....Great work! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:38:00 PM
wow,i think this is one of the best poems ive read on here :-) wonderful choice of words keep um comming and welcome to poetrysoup happy to have you peace and love,Jon
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