Fallen Angel

“Angels descending, bring from above, 
Echoes of mercy, whispers of love”
Glory abounded, light that was rare
Musical cherub now chained cold and bare,
Created for greatness, glimmered and gleaned,
Turned from the brightness, an Immortal machine,
Arrogance and vanity destroyed by rebellion,
Now a Fallen Angel, a force nolonger compelling,
Redemption polluted,
By views that were diluted,
The original sin,
To think you could win,
It wasn’t enough to be right under success,
You desired to be the ultimate best,
Everlasting wounds with eternal demise,
The most beautiful Angel now covered in lies,
Magnificence lost,
By the saviors cross,
The lake of sweltering fire,
Your new kingdom that has now transpired.

By: Sabina Nicole

Contest: Fallen Angel
2-12-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:56 PM
wow, you really told it how it is for the fallen angels. VERY nicely done, Sabina. Congratulations on your win.
Bunton Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 3:09 PM
congratulations!
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:22 PM
thank you, and you too:)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Congrats Sabina on your great win! Blessings, Rhonda
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:23 PM
thank you:)
Poet Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Congrats Sabina on your win in Tracie's contest.Beautiful poem.
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Thank you very much:)
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Sabina Nicole, first I wanted to say you have a beautiful name, I love it. Your work, here, is excellent. I really enjoyed it and congrats for placing on Tracie's winners list....................S.Ronthorpe
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Thank you for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed my poem:)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 7:17 AM
congrats Sabina on a fantastic win for wonderful words on fallen Angels luv.. amazing piece..
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:24 PM
Thank you and I hope you are doing well, in my heart and prayer oxox
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations a smashing write a deserving win xx
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:26 PM
Thank you hun:)
Pettit Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Impressive write. The added poetic portion has no trouble fitting in with your work.
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:25 PM
Yea I guess your right, Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it:)
A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:15 PM
Nice... Good luck in the contest..always..pd
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:27 PM
thank you:)
Wilson Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 2:49 PM
very expressive ..good luck in the contest love,Deb
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Thanks Deb,:)
Williams Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Beautiful rhyming, flow encourages the reader to go on.good luck in the contest with this wonderfully written piece
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:26 PM
:)
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