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Fallen Angel

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*Inspired by photo Fallen angel forlorn Broken hearted, spirit worn Seeking only to hide Unloved, until feelings subside Fallen in the empty field Vulnerable, without a shield Overcome by flights of confusion Only feeling heartbreak's contusion A hole that cannot be filled Resides within all the tears spilled Let it not be true, depth of despair Stealing the last breath of air Heidi Sands 3/1/18

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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 3/24/2018 2:26:00 PM
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Very good conceptual poetry, Heidi. LOVE the opening and closing couplets of this mighty fine poem. Love and joy always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2018 3:00:00 PM
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Thank you Freddie . I am happy you like this one. :)
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 3/5/2018 9:55:00 AM
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Oh it s really sad and at the same time you have written it really beautifully, this can also be used in other sense like a person who s feeling different from others, a feeling you are differnet feom others and surround by peoples who are not friendly
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/5/2018 9:56:00 AM
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Interesting. Thank you for your visit and kind feedback Faraz :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/4/2018 6:17:00 PM
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A "fallen angel!" How utterly sad...This poem really moved me. I felt the angel's pain and desperation. Marvelous write. :) Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/4/2018 6:20:00 PM
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Thank you for your visit and comment Gershon :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/3/2018 5:16:00 PM
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Beautiful poem Heidi, you inspired by the picture, but I saddened by your thoughts, now I need some laughter and I need it lots and lots.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/5/2018 5:37:00 PM
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I will try my dear friend...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/3/2018 5:19:00 PM
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Thank you Pashang. All is ok and I hope you have lots of laughter! :)
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Bette Bavington
Date: 3/3/2018 11:47:00 AM
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I think at one time or another every one feels this way. It is nice to know that some one else can feel the same way. I hope you are doing well.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/3/2018 1:02:00 PM
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You are right Bette. Sometimes anyone can feel this way. Thank you for your visit and comment. I am ok :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/2/2018 2:38:00 PM
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A sad poem Heidi, I hope the angel can breath once again...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2018 3:09:00 PM
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Yes Silent One, we can hope for that :) Thank you for your visit and comment !
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 3/2/2018 1:38:00 PM
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Nice one Heidi, love your rhyme too. Blessings Gordon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2018 1:39:00 PM
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Thank you Gordon :)
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 3/2/2018 11:47:00 AM
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Love the last line again!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2018 11:49:00 AM
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Thank you Kurt! :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/2/2018 9:57:00 AM
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So lovely - captures the image perfectly! - Michelle Faulkner
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2018 10:19:00 AM
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Thank you Michelle :) I appreciate your comment.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2018 6:13:00 AM
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Oh, so sad to see that picture of fallen angel..you depicted this well Heidi..filled with emotions!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2018 6:20:00 AM
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Thank you Vijay. Nice to see your visit and comment. Have a nice day :)
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Joseph May
Date: 3/1/2018 6:23:00 PM
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A well crafted write Heidi... best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2018 6:42:00 PM
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Thank you Joseph. :)

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