Fall To Winter, Rise To Spring

Fall to Winter, Rise to Spring


                                            Fallen, down and out
                                     Frozen, not dead nor decayed
                                           Rising, faith with wings!













                                               Kim Patrice Nunez
                                               November 15,2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:39 PM
This is a glorious one, Kim. I really admire a vivid and hopeful Haiku, and this is just so lovely. Hope you are doing well! Always, Laura
Crocker Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Very well done.
Terry Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 4:02 PM
This haiku is interesting. Can have so many meanings depending on the reader. The title is an observation on life in itself. Think this is one of the best I've read. Would like to see more. You excell at Haiku. Best. ;) Janece
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 4:21 AM
Creative work that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Nance Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Beautiful description! :)
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Kim, I really liked this Haiku. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Dillenbeck Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Yes, much shorter and to the same point. Rising faith with wings matures full summer's regenerative harvest. Lovely.
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:30 AM
ahhh, season to season. So nice!! Was hard for me to find a poem of yours I had not seen yet!!
Vaso Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:04 PM
This is absolutely beautiful and well, you are a genius!!! So much in those 3 lines!!
Nehls Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Hi Kim. These three lines can cover a multitude of subjects, time, and space. You have written universal wisdom into your words and arranged them in a way that stirs the senses. Very well done my friend. Blessings upon you.... Robert.
Mcdaid Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 3:17 PM
truly very beautifully painted haiku kim
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 8:15 AM
For me Haiku is the most difficult of forms. You seem to have it down.
Peranteau Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Wonderful! The imagery is so clear, I thought of myself in this write. It speaks volumes to me though written in so few words. Artistically done.
Bateman Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Kim, A wonderful Haiku write here and a big "7" from me too!! Best Always, Gary
Gifford Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:42 AM
A haiku expressing hope. I like it! And we all need those wings! A 7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:46 AM
beautiful.. :)
Celestial Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Best piece as well Kim!
Nunez Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Thank you David. As before, you didn't fail to expand...on what comes from my wand. Deeply appreciates your thoughts...Kim:)
Meade Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:54 PM
A seed falls to the ground, dead but not dead, resting for the spring. The cycle of life -- how many times do we cycle through this . . . many!! Loved the haiku
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