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Image result for pictures of a fall scene with sedumn autumn joy Collum Lune with word count instead of syllables..3/5/3 words

fall sun

golden sun rising deer ate sedum autumn joy.... fall's beauty brevity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 2:19 AM
- Beautifully written, Sara - At sunset, the deer come to eat in my garden every day. - Beautiful animals... but my flowers are too :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 2:42 AM
It is upsetting. I see something out there one day and during the night it disappears because they have eaten at least part of it then in the next few nights it will all be gone. Must be a large crop of deer this year. We have deer hunters around so maybe they will get some for their families to eat. Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the nice review and sharing of yourself. Sara K.
Buehler Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 9:03 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful, timely autumn poem, Sara. I love the picture, too. A wonderful presentation! 👏🌸
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the uplifting review of my work and choice of picture. Sara K. 👍⭐
Kerr Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 5:26 AM
Sara, Excellent title for a poem and equally delightful work. Tinged with sadness and joy tactfully. Marvellous post.🔥✨⭐ H
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 5:52 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the time spent here commenting. Way to go. 👍⭐. Sara K.
George Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 9:39 PM
I searched in google for the meaning of the word 'sedum'. Now I know, it is a plant of the succulent variety with pretty flowers, the one shown in the image. They look beautiful.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 5:46 AM
Why, thank you, Valsa. I don't know if they would grow and do well anywhere in the world or not, but they add a special touch in the fall of the year. Sara K. 👍⭐
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 8:02 PM
Thanks for the education, Sara. Now I know the meaning of 'sedum,' by gum! :) gw
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 5:39 AM
So delighted that you learned something, Gershon. They are of the succulent family of plants. The deer found my one plant in the yard a couple of years back and I guess they love it because they come every year to eat it. They eat all the leaves off of it. They used to come to my azaleas even though they are poisonous plant. They would only eat the new tender growth. My husband dug up all those beautiful plants because they had weeds in them bless his heart👍⭐. Thank you for dropping by and commenting. Sara K.
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