Sally Eslinger Poet Haiku

Fall Season Haiku

Fall Season Haiku
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grand yellow balls grip sight 
 red-speckled limbs  crown all 
beauty
yet
to 
fall

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(c) sally young Eslinger 11/2021
Alleluia
When I heard Japanese haiku are written in a vertical line, it inspired this haiku to use form-to-meaning.

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Michelle Faulkner November 28, 2021 at 5:18 PM I love how you arranged the imagery in the last lines to resemble leaves falling, so evocative~

Joe Maverick November 25, 2021 at 12:27 AM Suspense and awareness I take from this Sally Emjoyed' BTW sent you a mail.

Joanna Daniel November 20, 2021 at 12:39 AM Cute haiku, Sally, like the way you have formatted it too:)

Paulette Calasibetta November 19, 2021 at 9:59 AM Hi Sally, very interesting Haiku~using the Japanese style gives your poem a subtle impact. Blessings, Paulette