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Fall Season Haiku

Fall Season Haiku ——————————- grand yellow balls grip sight red-speckled limbs crown all beauty yet to fall ………………… —————————————————— (c) sally young Eslinger 11/2021 Alleluia When I heard Japanese haiku are written in a vertical line, it inspired this haiku to use form-to-meaning.

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Date: 11/28/2021 5:18:00 PM
I love how you arranged the imagery in the last lines to resemble leaves falling, so evocative~
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Date: 11/25/2021 12:27:00 AM
Suspense and awareness I take from this Sally Emjoyed' BTW sent you a mail.
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Date: 11/20/2021 12:39:00 AM
Cute haiku, Sally, like the way you have formatted it too:)
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Date: 11/19/2021 9:59:00 AM
Hi Sally, very interesting Haiku~using the Japanese style gives your poem a subtle impact. Blessings, Paulette
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