Fall Scene

Gold and red leaves cling
To the line of poplar trees
By the parking lot
Two young lovers, hand in hand,
Discussing their weekend plans.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Thomas Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 5:28 AM
Wonderful fall scene. Brings back warm memories of when my husband and I were dating (nearly 25 years ago!) during our favorite time of year. Thank you so much for your comment on my haiku "Winter Creek"...I appreciate it so much!
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November 18, 2008 at 6:07 PM
This sounds (and in my mind looks) like a scene from any town, any where, young love in the Fall. Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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