Fall Overloaded

We had two, enormous Black Walnut trees
That would shed every leaf in the fall.
The lawn would be blanketed, brilliant yellow
As the cold, north winds would call.

The task was foreboding to say the least,
The work would be hard, I conceded.
To prepare for winter and snow to come
Raking the leaves was needed.

Many years since, in a distant state
I find myself raking again
And a memory stirred my heart anew
And with joy I remembered when….

After toilsome hours of gathering leaves
My body sore and aching,
A ritual started that to this day
Brings fondness of raking’s partaking.

My son and daughter would anxiously wait
For the leaves to be heaped in a pile.
At my, “Okay!” they would dive in headfirst
And be buried alive with smiles.

Laughter ensued, and joy was the mood
As our mountain of leaves exploded.
Rake ‘em again!  Pile it up so we can
Dive in over and over, with Fall overloaded. 

By Tom Valles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Are you still toiling with leaf raking? This is a nice poem. My hubbie and I have never raked . Winter comes and buries the leaves. Spring comes and the yard comes back green!
Valles Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Lucky you! I do have less to rake now that we are in a place with smaller trees. Thanks for your kind words as always. I hope you have a terrific holiday season.
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