Fall Omen

Twinkling,
when even the day
is shrinking,
and the sun declines
in the fold of the mountains,
belches out quietly
the fall flame from
the cornfield,
where the raven
is only
the fingers of a plough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Bozhidar. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:12 AM
Bozhidar congrats on your win, love it..David
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:11 AM
wow,this is GREAT. I wish almost all poems were short and to the point like this one! Congrats on your win.
Rozario Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 8:55 AM
nice...enjoyed!!
Price Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 2:09 AM
nice imagery
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