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Fall Omen

Twinkling, when even the day is shrinking, and the sun declines in the fold of the mountains, belches out quietly the fall flame from the cornfield, where the raven is only the fingers of a plough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Bozhidar. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:12:00 AM
Bozhidar congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:11:00 AM
wow,this is GREAT. I wish almost all poems were short and to the point like this one! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/20/2012 8:55:00 AM
nice...enjoyed!!
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Date: 7/19/2012 2:09:00 AM
nice imagery
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