Fall of 2009

I will know when the end is near
how I wasted these golden years
the stories of the wise and dear
will not save me from what I fear

this weary face that was never mine
let's take off, leave it behind
as home becomes a place to find
for once in my life, I'll take my time

so snap my spine and fire this bow
count the rings that begin to show
singing to me more years than I know
it's time we finally let ourselves go

no shame or stones or sins to atone
here where we are, new and alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Julia, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 2:04 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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August 6, 2009 at 7:24 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Well done! Laura :)
Jordan Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 10:48 PM
Julia - Congratulations on having your well written poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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August 3, 2009 at 8:14 AM
I like the wisdom here Julia,..and congratulations on its feature this week !! james
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August 3, 2009 at 4:40 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Joe Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 9:27 AM
I like the use of rhyme in this. It flows like a stream of consciousness and so nothing seems forced. A really lovely piece of potetic writing. Though I do wish you had used punctuation to give the narrative a stronger platform.
Joe Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 9:25 AM
I like the use of rhyme in this. It flows like a stream of consciousness and so nothing seems forced. A really lovely piece of potetic writing.
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April 19, 2009 at 1:49 AM
so words really speak ... a very inspiring writing Julia! i love how it all rhymes ... but then it is a sonnet! excellent write! ~ Arany
Anderson Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 11:45 PM
very compelling piece, julia. a wonderful thought provoking read. i reall enjoyed this
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