Fall Leaves - From a Neighborhood Child

FALL LEAVES

First    color catches the eye
Yellow    tan    brown
Parented colors of sun and sky
Bronzed    gold-crusted
The breeze seeming to sift 
A finest dust into the air    to lift

Above all    a leafy hill
The PILE!
Raked by Brother, Bill
Beside the bullet tree
Mixed up by the breeze
I’m buried clear up to my knees

My first impulse was to run and jump atop
To roll around    
Yet    I flopped
Rising    quite soaked through
By the still green heavy mass
Of hidden October grass

Still it’s time to roll around
Looking upward
At the twiggy web above the ground
As a few stray leaves    given up
Flutter down
Golden yellow    milk chocolate brown

The great round trunk of the bullet tree
Reaches    its fingers bare
Standing alone so painfully    
The sky sorrows down
With here and there a tattered    black-fringed cloud
I standing     SHOUTING!    sounding comically proud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Such a vivid picture you paint here Dave. Love it! Lainie
Wesley Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Read this listening to Bolero in the background and it gave a hypnotizing feel to the vision through the eyes of a child.Loved it!
Onclaud Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 5:54 AM
a total burst of the senses celebrating the wonder of the season, daver.. love this!..:) huggs, nette
K. Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 2:49 PM
I sure could imagine this, Daver-- never experienced fall so this was such an enjoyable read for me :D thank you for writing this-- made me experience a bit of it :) hugs to you :D
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September 23, 2011 at 4:58 PM
What a fun poem. Has me smiling. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind comments. Have a good weekend. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 6:35 PM
a yummy delight of leaves described Daver with lovely essence of colors and hues.. wish we could all jump into the mounds of leaves that will be piling on walkways soon luv.. October is the month..a breathtaking beauty and flavor filled piece from Daver my friend..luv..
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