fall leaves

2ND PLACEMENT : STANDARD CONTEST
Sponsor : Tania Kitchin 

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    golden we return 

          into earth’s belly ferment ~

              wrinkles make sand grains
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Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 1:48 AM
a profound Haiku.. Great win Ghairo..
Daniels Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 3:21 AM
ThkU, Sweets. Congrats your way too. Keep going. X.
Kitchin Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 4:45 AM
Ghairo, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative fall haiku.
Daniels Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Tania, ThkU for placement & your sterling work in organising contests.x.
Hind Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Very deep and I love this, Ghairo. "wrinkles make sand grains"
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