Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Fall In Love Again

Fall in love again
why did you look back and smile?....

not my fault at all.



Bring back your sixteen
I will be nineteen at ease,
have fun and frolic,
let's have that air balloon ride
in the sky of teenage love.


Just give me your hands my love,
in your white lotus like palms
I will paint my poetry...
poetry of love.




© kashinath karmakar(22nd May, 2011)
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Placement: 7th; (June 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar

Contest:Fun and Frolic (3 Forms)

Sponsor:Linda-Marie The Sweetheart

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Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2013 at 1:05 AM Rereading this sweet one of yours from so long ago. Kash, wow,you put up a new avatar. It is really nice looking.

Elizabeth Wesley June 26, 2011 at 5:27 PM Congrats on your win - a romatic verse well toled

John Freeman June 13, 2011 at 7:53 PM Kashinath, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan June 10, 2011 at 12:52 PM Congrats Kashi on your wonderful win in this contest of Linda's..gautami

Wilma Neels June 9, 2011 at 12:14 PM Hey there Kash, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;)

Joseph Osita June 9, 2011 at 10:25 AM Many congrats on your well deserved win in linda marie's contest.cheers

Jack Horne June 9, 2011 at 10:20 AM Many congratulations on both your wins, Kash : )

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 7:03 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2011 at 7:02 AM My congratulations on the winn in the contest of Linda, kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 5:16 PM Congrats Kash on your top ten win in my contest luv..

Chhutan Dey May 24, 2011 at 9:45 PM Conversational tone...spontaneous movement...liked the wantonness in expression...regards and thanks fr ur comment on my poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 24, 2011 at 8:55 AM thankxx for your sweet comments on my work Kash and hope u enjoy my card entry just posted too.. what a hard challenge that one was luv.. hope u are enjoying your day ..

Matt Hunt May 23, 2011 at 8:11 PM Very good Kash! I hope you do well in the contest:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 23, 2011 at 9:26 AM Romantic Kashinath is at it again ;) very sweet write from you :)

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2011 at 9:19 PM oh my gosh you never heard of Monopoly?? It's a board game ummm, I mean BORED game. ahhaha. It is a model for capitalism. Another reason I don't like it. Luv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2011 at 8:29 PM Simply beautiful, Kash. YOu are a very fine romantic poetry writer. I think that is your niche!! soupmail for ya.

Wilma Neels May 22, 2011 at 1:13 PM Oh my word Kash, I love this!!! Good luck for the contest ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 22, 2011 at 1:03 PM Passionate and romantic expressions with humor, kashinath

Francine Roberts May 22, 2011 at 12:50 PM very romantic piece, best of luck in the contest with this lovely entry Kash

Carolyn Devonshire May 22, 2011 at 12:04 PM Oh, to feel the romance of our youth again, Kash. Positively beautiful! Winning wishes coming your way for the contest. Hope you'll consider entering my contest as well. Have a wonderful day, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick May 22, 2011 at 12:00 PM Romantic and touching..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Good luck in the contest with this winners' circle work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 10:51 AM oh thankxx for supporting my current contest Kash .. good luck and am sure I will be amazed by your entry .. read fully at judging time.. thankxx for all the birthday wishes and fun comments so sweet ...

Gwendolen Song May 22, 2011 at 8:48 AM congrats on what? This entry is special with its nature-like descriptions of your love's hands like white lotus...blow em away, my friend. The footle contest has not been posted has it? I looked and keep receiving notes from you guys but that's all. HOw bizarre. This is the second time this has occured.

Kash Poet May 22, 2011 at 7:42 AM WHY did YOU look back and smile?