Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Fall I Yearn

Leaves are floating 
upon the breeze
As they let loose of 
their tight hold
Trees awaiting 
the winter freeze
Colors of golden,red 
orange so bold

Nights becoming a 
bit more chilled
Yet the stars won't 
release the night skies
Autumns moonlight 
melts onto the fields
The breeze now
whispers with sighs

Beauty within each 
of the seasons
As they bow and 
take their turn
Recalling all the 
many reasons
Falls elegance I 
will always yearn

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John Hamilton September 26, 2019 at 1:00 PM Very nice Brenda, love fall, but what it portends not so much! Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 1:49 PM Fall is beautiful I understand I hate winter!;)

Ann Foster August 29, 2019 at 12:20 PM I agree fall is so lovely indeed. A memorable sweet poem. Ann Brenda Chiri August 29, 2019 at 12:56 PM Thank you Ann I concur!;)

Nick Trim August 28, 2019 at 6:10 AM fall lol you yanks always simplifying things it's Autumn lol surprised you don't call winter "the wet", good writing though Nick Trim August 28, 2019 at 2:09 PM autumn autumn autumn your dumb you're dumb short nun sore bum Brenda Chiri August 28, 2019 at 11:10 AM Lol I used Autumn silly muppet I couldn't keep repeating it!;) you are such a nut! Haha! Thx nick!;)

Gershon Wolf August 27, 2019 at 8:37 PM This is just delightful, Brenda, and resonant too. Poignantly penned. ~ gw Brenda Chiri August 27, 2019 at 11:22 PM Gershon thank you! You are far too kind!;)

Chris Green August 27, 2019 at 3:24 PM This was beautiful Brenda. I'm with you, I am yearning for the arrival of fall. But not so much winter. : ) This was really nicely done, the meter was smooth and the rhyming spot on. Brenda Chiri August 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM Thanks so much Chris! Much appreciated!;)