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Fall I Yearn

Leaves are floating upon the breeze As they let loose of their tight hold Trees awaiting the winter freeze Colors of golden,red orange so bold Nights becoming a bit more chilled Yet the stars won't release the night skies Autumns moonlight melts onto the fields The breeze now whispers with sighs Beauty within each of the seasons As they bow and take their turn Recalling all the many reasons Falls elegance I will always yearn

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John Hamilton

Date: 9/26/2019 1:00:00 PM

Very nice Brenda, love fall, but what it portends not so much!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:49:00 PM

Fall is beautiful I understand I hate winter!;)

Ann Foster

Date: 8/29/2019 12:20:00 PM

I agree fall is so lovely indeed. A memorable sweet poem. Ann

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 12:56:00 PM

Thank you Ann I concur!;)

Nick Trim

Date: 8/28/2019 6:10:00 AM

fall lol you yanks always simplifying things it's Autumn lol surprised you don't call winter "the wet", good writing though

Nick Trim
Date: 8/28/2019 2:09:00 PM

autumn autumn autumn your dumb you're dumb short nun sore bum

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/28/2019 11:10:00 AM

Lol I used Autumn silly muppet I couldn't keep repeating it!;) you are such a nut! Haha! Thx nick!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2019 8:37:00 PM

This is just delightful, Brenda, and resonant too. Poignantly penned. ~ gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/27/2019 11:22:00 PM

Gershon thank you! You are far too kind!;)

Chris Green

Date: 8/27/2019 3:24:00 PM

This was beautiful Brenda. I'm with you, I am yearning for the arrival of fall. But not so much winter. : ) This was really nicely done, the meter was smooth and the rhyming spot on.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/27/2019 3:30:00 PM

Thanks so much Chris! Much appreciated!;)