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{fall Haiku}

squirrels scamper
gathering, playful, desperate
Fall's last call




(For Andrea's Haiku contest)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2014 8:12:00 PM

Hi Kris, haven't seen you around in years... xox~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2012 8:50:00 PM

Kris, I am here a year later to ask again. What ever happened with you? You quit emailing me too and I will never know why. I hope all is well in your life. Luv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 1/15/2011 9:26:00 AM

Yes. Today I had around 8 of the fine fellows running all over my back yard burying nuts or digging up old ones. I have several cats who like to visit. Strangely, the cats aren't interested in chasing the squirrels, but when they do, the squirrels have a ball making fools of the pusses. Like your Haiku. Love, Dave

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 1/14/2011 9:00:00 PM

what a well placed write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2010 8:36:00 PM

Hey, kris, long time no SEE. WHere are you???

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2010 2:20:00 AM

oo love it Kris, congrats,, in the contest,, p.s. i posted a dedication and you will spy your name in my poem called, ~101 POETS~ hope to see you comment there,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/9/2010 11:08:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2010 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations Kris on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2010 1:46:00 PM

Congrats Kris on your HM in Andrea's contest with this wonderful entry.. enjoyed the visual here.. enjoy your special honor today with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2010 1:28:00 PM

Kris, Congrats on your HM in Andrea's contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2010 1:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Kris ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2010 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations Kris on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2010 8:19:00 AM

Oh yes the fall feeding frenzy Kris. I've observed this many times, the squirrels are seeming oblvious to anything but their feeding. Congratulations on a beautiful Haiku. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/8/2010 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on this well mdeserved win in the contest, Kris

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2010 5:34:00 AM

congrats on the placement!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2010 4:04:00 AM

Kris, hello there, dear friend. Sorry I didn't give you a top ten place since I think you are so talented! Thanks for supporting my contest even when you don't feel inspired lately. Loved the alliteration in your first line. Congrats on the HM. This was a very interesting contest for me to judge. It's almost 6 a.m. I never slept yet. Can you believe it?. LUv, Andrea

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 10/2/2010 3:32:00 PM

I love watching squirrels. They are so tame in my local park, they come and take nuts from your hands. Enjoyed your haiku Kris, best wishes in Andrea's contest ~ Sharon :)

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 10/2/2010 1:17:00 PM

very nice well done good luck in the contest and have a great weekend faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2010 10:19:00 AM

What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Kris. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/30/2010 6:44:00 AM

Nice haiku on squirrel's activities during the fall's last call, kris

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/29/2010 11:42:00 PM

I once saw a cartoon where the squirrels had posted notes to remind them where they had hidden their nuts..this reminded me of that. Nice one. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2010 9:34:00 PM

Desperately seeking the last array of acorns. Cute image, Kris. Love the last line -- my mother used to yell out "last call" when we were slow getting to the dinner table. Best wishes in Andrea's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2010 7:30:00 PM

Nice visual Kris.. good luck in Andrea's contest..luv.. a sweet picture in words..luv..

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