Fall Garden Clean Up

It is fall clean up in my garden, Lord.
I'm feeling guilty, sad, lonesome and blue.
The grasses and the weeds have over run
The lovely flowers, planted there for you.

Is this a mirror to my life dear Lord?
Have all my kinder deeds been overcome
By ugly thoughts and hurting acts and words?
Wild dandelion crowds out chrysanthemum?

Forgive me, Lord, if I have failed to tend
My garden in the manner that I should.
I'd claim the days I spent so foolishly
And use them more gainfully if I could.

Now that I'm in the autumn of my days,
I hope to take each day I have in store
And spend each precious second of that time
More usefully than I have done before.

Now as I pull each baneful weed and grass,
Removing each intruder one by one,
I hope to stand before you judgment day
Well kept, weed free, with all my gardening done.

By Joyce Johnson


For Constance a Rambling Poet's "I am sending you a gift of poetry, dear heart" contest

Inspired by her "Working in The Garden" poem on page 7 of her file
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "I am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart". It is an honor to be on the list with you. Love, Carol
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October 2, 2010 at 12:06 AM
Joyce, you have truly taken all the weeds out of this work and made a beautiful garden of words. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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October 1, 2010 at 11:08 PM
wow, Joyce ,you never cease to amaze me with the profoundness of your poetry. Luv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joyce...Beautiful and inspiring. Love, Audrey
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October 1, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
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October 1, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win in Constance's contest.. a lovely piece from her inspirational poem.. enjoy a super win tonight my friend with luv..
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September 27, 2010 at 12:41 PM
What a wonderful write for the contest! I truly enjoyed reading. Caryl
Brown Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 9:53 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Joyce and the best to you in the contest.. Love, Carol
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September 14, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Wow! What a thought-provoking, introspective poem, Joyce. There are a few weeds I'd like to pull out of my past as well. Terrific entry for Constance's contest. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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