Fall For Her

airs falling like leaves
 she changes like the weather
            predictably so



08/20/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hopper Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Predictably so. I love it!
Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:11 AM
She changes like a weather~ tricky line:-) I believe your fine Mo mam.Take care. Much love from Deepa:-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 5:00 AM
Thank you Deepa! I wrote this moments before I knew I was about to dye my hair blue ;), xomo! <3
Koplin Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Very clever my friend! A new fav for me. Great job Mo!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Thank you Mark! Mo hugs ~x
Faulkner Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Predictably unpredictable - is this the poetic version of a self portrait?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:15 AM
You got me <3
Connelly Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Predictably brilliant Maureen!!!!!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Thankya ~x!
Romios Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Kewl and Klever. PANGIE XX
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Thank you Pangie! xo Pidge!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 3:18 PM
I love this - it appeals to every speck of Gemini in my soul which is my whole soul.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:28 AM
...she writes just before she dyes her hair blue ;), (I was supposed to be a Gemini, but so stubborn I had to be a Taurus) xomo! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Nice! I’m ready for a change.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:26 AM
You got it babe <3
One Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Don't all women change like the weather? Lol. Just kidding
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Keen eye ;), xomo! <3
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 12:09 PM
- We know that the handsome man gets the "dream lady" in the end ... but, is it a happy ending? - Good one, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:25 AM
That'll depend on him ;), Hugs & Giggles! xomo
Leffanta Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Why would the weather be anymore unpredictable than people/birds/animals et al? Thoughtful write! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:25 AM
Predictably unpredictable I say ;), ...if the picture is big enough ~xomo!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Hello Maureen,this is beautiful! i love it! Enjoy your day my friend. xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Hello Maureen, you are welcome. It is a hot humid day here. I am enjoying it. My fva. season. Hugs xxx-ooo. Darlene..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you dear Darlene! have a wonderful day! xomo
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 10:02 AM
oh I love it Mo sharp ink!:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Jan! Have a lovely day! xomo
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