Fall fancies

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Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Contest: Autumn Haiku

faint essence exudes 
gentle generosity 
I’m swept by your scent 

carnival raiment 
gorgeously garbed in motley 
I’m lost in your charms 

following each leaf 
landing lightly down below 
I’m falling for you

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Rob Carmack

Date: 10/10/2024 7:28:00 PM

I like this style. I hope it places.

Gary Radice

Date: 9/28/2024 8:22:00 AM

A clever write Margarita, particularly with the meaning of the word 'fall'. I enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary

Margarita Lillico
Date: 9/28/2024 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Gary.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/21/2024 9:41:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Fall fancies" Haiku writes. I love fall with the pretty colors. It will be here very soon. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed/fun weekend................

Margarita Lillico
Date: 9/21/2024 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Paula. I am very much attuned with the Fall as well.