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Written: October 28, 2023 _________________________________________ Autumn shrubs gracefully fall to the ground. Crimson love dips; its bright sparkle is around. Life is struck by the tempo of men's embrace. Cool tumble weather has settled in with grace.   Colors merge and mingle in a saffron delight. Cherish and share them with the Moon sight. Such as the vivid tail of a rare comet. Simpers strive to be savored and fade with garnet.   Ask for just a few moments of peace at night. The stars twinkle, and the night sky is bright. In this faded deceit, where dreams and truth collide, A picture is such a joy for capturing the vital side. It's an everlasting enticement as it lays its spell. And spiels as slender sporadic stems should swell. The key to happiness may be spotted in silence. Such times and places remain in defiance. As the wind gently rustles through the trees, Nature sings its symphony with a gentle breeze. Leaves twirl and spin, akin to dancers in the air. Creating a masterpiece beyond compare

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Date: 10/29/2023 11:25:00 AM
Nice poem with vivid imagery.
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Date: 10/29/2023 9:06:00 AM
Great imagery. I love hearing your poem being read. It enhances our poetic values. Blessings.
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Date: 10/29/2023 6:34:00 AM
I don't know how you do it with these rhymes and all these rhymes full of imagery and delight.. you express so well, you must have been born a poet... each stanza has brilliant imagery and as a gardener i was hooked to your poem from the first stanza, as i have been there myself in my garden.. In awe of your poetic genius and this one is definitely a fave for me..
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Date: 10/29/2023 5:21:00 AM
Colors merge and mingle in a saffron delight--Colors merge and mingle in a saffron delight--beautiful autumn imagery, my friend.
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Date: 10/29/2023 3:54:00 AM
Dear Sotto, i dont have enough words to praise this beauty! The way you paint imagery with such descriptive words effortlessly is beyond impeccable! Where do i begin praising this brilliant write! I see fall through your words! Ah saffron delight, and leaves dance and spin , as stars twinkle and dreams collide with truth! Gosh! This is one of my fave poems from you! Imagery at its finest! So sophisticated! And those rhymes are captivating! Left me in awe! So gorgeous! Absolute pleasure reading
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Date: 10/29/2023 12:35:00 AM
As the wind gently rustles through the trees, Nature sings its symphony with a gentle breeze. Leaves twirl and spin, akin to dancers in the air. Creating a masterpiece beyond compare Your words are art. True and clearly brilliant.
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Date: 10/28/2023 6:48:00 PM
Such a happy little scene you have described there. Which everyday could be the picture perfect of beauty.
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