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Fall Daydream

The crunching of leaves And twigs breaking under my feet The crackling of a warm fire It's warm smoky smell wafting through the air And I am caught in a daze Intoxicated by this colorful world Beautiful and dream like I could get lost For Linda's (Poet Destroyer's) Contest, One Autumn Day Brittany Larson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/29/2014 10:13:00 AM
Congrats Brittany you made it. Lovely poet.Best wishes for 2015. God bless you. Take care>>>>Your friend Rajat
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:34:00 PM
this is really nice, Brittany. i sure enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:49:00 AM
Congrats Brittany,yours stands out...huggs
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:09:00 AM
Such delightful imagery Brittany - many congrats hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/28/2014 10:18:00 AM
Brittany,Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/15/2014 5:05:00 AM
Allegory is the art, a nice write... simply enjoyed reading you... friend.. Malik
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:03:00 AM
Wildfire may be. California? Color of Fall? Fire or flower--riot of colors? Why is it a daydream? Good image(ination). Loved it. Hugs!
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