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Fall brings New Love

Welcome in the Fall of life Spring enters

Loves emptied heart replenished with his touch

I become his Muse and he is my center

Lips burning passion captured in his clutch

Shared breath nothing compares to this splendor

Two bodies align in time they are flush

Worn hearts beating young with exhilaration

Once again falling into loves temptation









Contest: New Love
Sponsored by, Jarred Pickett 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/18/2011 8:24:00 AM
very nice job, excellent poem. Julie heckman
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:30:00 PM
Sharon, thanks for your comment on my poem. I like this poem it is so warm. Good luck in the contest. Jancarl HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:01:00 PM
Wow so much passion here Sharon, good Luck with the this wonderful contest entry. have a happy New Year, Harry
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:38:00 AM
Omw Sharon, you picked a great combination to bring you point across.. I love this stunning piece.. love Wilma
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:34:00 AM
wow, you captured the essence of spring very romantically. ME LIKES! good luck in the contest, Sharon!
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:33:00 AM
Beautifully written for the contest,Sharon.Very passionate indeed
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:29:00 PM
The best of luck in the contest,, and i'm also here to wish you a merry x- mass.. and a wonderful new year,..p.d.
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Date: 12/22/2010 3:38:00 PM
Good luck in Jared's contest Sharon with this lovely piece. Have a wonderful Christmas >> James :)
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Date: 12/21/2010 2:53:00 PM
Wonderful work.. Enjoyed.. Looking forward to reading more..
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:12:00 PM
thankxxx Shar and appreciate your wonderful words of encouragement and special uplift my friend... enjoy your holidays with luv..
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:30:00 PM
You have penned quite romantic thoughts on the new love, shar. Good luck
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:14:00 PM
Spicy and sweet Shar.. a grand entry for the contest for Jared.. he will enjoy these sultry lines so passionate my friend.. good luck in the contest with luv.. winner for sure ...
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Date: 12/17/2010 5:09:00 PM
Very pretty, Sharon. I wish you luck in this contest. You rose to the challenge! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/17/2010 4:35:00 PM
This is a lovely write on love... warms th heart my dear ... as always with love Michael
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Date: 12/17/2010 4:24:00 PM
This is a fantastic write dear poet ! I really like this one ! To mine favz ! much love, james....soup mail
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