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Fall Brings New Love

Welcome in the Fall of life Spring enters Loves emptied heart replenished with his touch I become his Muse and he is my center Lips burning passion captured in his clutch Shared breath nothing compares to this splendor Two bodies align in time they are flush Worn hearts beating young with exhilaration Once again falling into loves temptation Contest: New Love Sponsored by, Jarred Pickett Ottava rima

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Julie Heckman

Date: 1/18/2011 8:24:00 AM

very nice job, excellent poem. Julie heckman

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/27/2010 10:30:00 PM

Sharon, thanks for your comment on my poem. I like this poem it is so warm. Good luck in the contest. Jancarl HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2010 8:01:00 PM

Wow so much passion here Sharon, good Luck with the this wonderful contest entry. have a happy New Year, Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/27/2010 10:38:00 AM

Omw Sharon, you picked a great combination to bring you point across.. I love this stunning piece.. love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2010 8:34:00 AM

wow, you captured the essence of spring very romantically. ME LIKES! good luck in the contest, Sharon!

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/27/2010 6:33:00 AM

Beautifully written for the contest,Sharon.Very passionate indeed

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2010 7:29:00 PM

The best of luck in the contest,, and i'm also here to wish you a merry x- mass.. and a wonderful new year,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 12/22/2010 3:38:00 PM

Good luck in Jared's contest Sharon with this lovely piece. Have a wonderful Christmas >> James :)

Dana Smith

Date: 12/21/2010 2:53:00 PM

Wonderful work.. Enjoyed.. Looking forward to reading more..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/20/2010 7:12:00 PM

thankxxx Shar and appreciate your wonderful words of encouragement and special uplift my friend... enjoy your holidays with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 6:30:00 PM

You have penned quite romantic thoughts on the new love, shar. Good luck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 6:14:00 PM

Spicy and sweet Shar.. a grand entry for the contest for Jared.. he will enjoy these sultry lines so passionate my friend.. good luck in the contest with luv.. winner for sure ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2010 5:09:00 PM

Very pretty, Sharon. I wish you luck in this contest. You rose to the challenge! Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/17/2010 4:35:00 PM

This is a lovely write on love... warms th heart my dear ... as always with love Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 12/17/2010 4:24:00 PM

This is a fantastic write dear poet ! I really like this one ! To mine favz ! much love, james....soup mail