Sharon Ruebel Poet Ottava rima

Fall Brings New Love

Welcome in the Fall of life Spring enters

Loves emptied heart replenished with his touch

I become his Muse and he is my center

Lips burning passion captured in his clutch

Shared breath nothing compares to this splendor

Two bodies align in time they are flush

Worn hearts beating young with exhilaration

Once again falling into loves temptation









Contest: New Love
Sponsored by, Jarred Pickett 
Ottava rima

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Julie Heckman January 18, 2011 at 8:24 AM very nice job, excellent poem. Julie heckman

Jancarl Campi December 27, 2010 at 10:30 PM Sharon, thanks for your comment on my poem. I like this poem it is so warm. Good luck in the contest. Jancarl HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!

Harry Horsman December 27, 2010 at 8:01 PM Wow so much passion here Sharon, good Luck with the this wonderful contest entry. have a happy New Year, Harry

Wilma Neels December 27, 2010 at 10:38 AM Omw Sharon, you picked a great combination to bring you point across.. I love this stunning piece.. love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2010 at 8:34 AM wow, you captured the essence of spring very romantically. ME LIKES! good luck in the contest, Sharon!

Fabiyas M V December 27, 2010 at 6:33 AM Beautifully written for the contest,Sharon.Very passionate indeed

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2010 at 7:29 PM The best of luck in the contest,, and i'm also here to wish you a merry x- mass.. and a wonderful new year,..p.d.

James Fraser December 22, 2010 at 3:38 PM Good luck in Jared's contest Sharon with this lovely piece. Have a wonderful Christmas >> James :)

Dana Smith December 21, 2010 at 2:53 PM Wonderful work.. Enjoyed.. Looking forward to reading more..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 20, 2010 at 7:12 PM thankxxx Shar and appreciate your wonderful words of encouragement and special uplift my friend... enjoy your holidays with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta December 17, 2010 at 6:30 PM You have penned quite romantic thoughts on the new love, shar. Good luck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 17, 2010 at 6:14 PM Spicy and sweet Shar.. a grand entry for the contest for Jared.. he will enjoy these sultry lines so passionate my friend.. good luck in the contest with luv.. winner for sure ...

Andrea Dietrich December 17, 2010 at 5:09 PM Very pretty, Sharon. I wish you luck in this contest. You rose to the challenge! Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico December 17, 2010 at 4:35 PM This is a lovely write on love... warms th heart my dear ... as always with love Michael

James Peranteau December 17, 2010 at 4:24 PM This is a fantastic write dear poet ! I really like this one ! To mine favz ! much love, james....soup mail