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Fall Birdfeeder

fall birdfeeder
refilled to the brim
~ squirrels tickled pink



AP: 1st place 2025

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Paul Callus

May 29, 2018 at 2:26 PM

Very suggestive, Line. I hope the squirrels leave a tip:) Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

May 29, 2018 at 4:03 PM

Unlikely, Paul. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

May 29, 2018 at 1:42 PM

This describes my squirrels to a T. They have to fight the deer for the birdfood

Line Gauthier

May 29, 2018 at 4:03 PM

So why do they call it bird food anyway? LOL

Barry Stebbings

May 29, 2018 at 1:18 PM

Vary good, Line. Squirrels are a pest. // Barry

Warren Doll

May 29, 2018 at 10:52 AM

Great Senryu, Line. I can see the squirrels running to the birdfeeder.

Line Gauthier

May 29, 2018 at 4:04 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Warren.

Dale Gregory Cozart

May 29, 2018 at 10:29 AM

Hopefully you have a baffle to keep the squirrels out. Clever write.

Line Gauthier

May 29, 2018 at 4:05 PM

The squirrels are the clever ones. LOL. Thanks for your visit and comment, Dale.

Tom Cunningham

May 29, 2018 at 2:49 AM

I bet they were Line, lol

Line Gauthier

May 29, 2018 at 6:56 AM

LOL. Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom.

Mick Talbot

May 28, 2018 at 6:25 PM

a little cracker...... a joy... birds shelling peanuts...... the squirrels' hoard them.......

Line Gauthier

May 28, 2018 at 6:40 PM

I like your comments more than my senryu, Mick - LOL !

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