Fall Arrives

Summer was waiting with bags packed
As the fall rains urge her on her way.

Joyce Johnson

For mini Blog contest   Constance's crystalline contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Locksley Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 5:04 PM
I'm not familiar with the form, Joyce, but your clever poem gave me a giggle. Good luck in the contest!
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September 24, 2010 at 4:52 PM
a lovely entry, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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September 24, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Delightfully creative image, Joyce! It's raining here in Florida today, but I have no doubt that summer weather will linger for months in the Sunshine state. She has a ways to go before she starts packing her bags. LOL Love, Carolyn
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