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Fall Arrives

Summer was waiting with bags packed As the fall rains urge her on her way. Joyce Johnson For mini Blog contest Constance's crystalline contest.

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Date: 9/24/2010 5:04:00 PM
I'm not familiar with the form, Joyce, but your clever poem gave me a giggle. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:52:00 PM
a lovely entry, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:44:00 PM
Delightfully creative image, Joyce! It's raining here in Florida today, but I have no doubt that summer weather will linger for months in the Sunshine state. She has a ways to go before she starts packing her bags. LOL Love, Carolyn
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