Fall Affair

Fall’s fire is written on every deciduous tree, A chorus of harmony displayed for all to see. The first frost paints lace on the window pane, Patterns and designs are never quite the same, The smell of burning wood floats in the chilled air, Signs that everything’s in place for a great love affair. Come together and cuddle close by the roaring fire, Sipping at hot cocoa, looking at your heart’s desire. It’s time to settle down with that special someone, Beachboys and parties of the summer are all done. The spark burns brightly on this lovely autumn day, Hoping this new simmering love beyond fall, will stay. Written October 1, 2011 By Lee Ramage For Michael J. Falotico’s contest Falling in Love in the Fall Won 4th place

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Date: 10/8/2011 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on a deserving win in Michael's Contest, Lee! Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/7/2011 4:39:00 PM
Such warmth and love in this excellent piece you have put together.... Congrats my friend..... always Michael
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Date: 10/7/2011 4:27:00 PM
I see this write has done well Lee, as i would expect..Congratulations, and thank you for the comments.
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:03:00 PM
Just dreamy a real Hallmark moment I wish we could sell some of these! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/7/2011 11:24:00 AM
Lee, Autumn is my favorite season of the year and you expressed beautifully how I feel about this season. Its a shame it's such a short season. Love it!!!!
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Falling in Love in the Fall" contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2011 6:25:00 AM
congrats on your contest win, that's a great opening line, really evocative of autumn :-)
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:10:00 AM
Yes Lee its great the image on plate, red n brown leave incite, love in the night, a perfect sweet date, mate ...orright very well done here...
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/7/2011 1:14:00 AM
Thanks Don
Date: 10/6/2011 3:41:00 PM
this was a beautiful entry.. congrats on your win. free spirit
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/7/2011 1:15:00 AM
Thanks Free spirit!
Date: 10/6/2011 2:16:00 PM
I agree with Barbara, Lee. This is surely one of the best entries. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/7/2011 1:15:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn. Lee
Date: 10/6/2011 1:15:00 PM
I think this one is awesome..glad for your success in the contest. BG
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/7/2011 1:16:00 AM
Thanks Barbara. Lee
Date: 10/6/2011 9:18:00 AM
Congrats, Lee. I enjoyed it! :)
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Date: 10/6/2011 12:02:00 AM
Congrats Lee on an outstanding win with this exciting and excellent creativity luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 10/2/2011 4:41:00 AM
see it flow and how it was, sweet love it moves, and thoughts mind do cross, a great maifestation, of love....
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/5/2011 11:21:00 PM
Thanks Don. Lee
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