Fall Affair

Fall’s fire is written on every deciduous tree, A chorus of harmony displayed for all to see. The first frost paints lace on the window pane, Patterns and designs are never quite the same, The smell of burning wood floats in the chilled air, Signs that everything’s in place for a great love affair. Come together and cuddle close by the roaring fire, Sipping at hot cocoa, looking at your heart’s desire. It’s time to settle down with that special someone, Beachboys and parties of the summer are all done. The spark burns brightly on this lovely autumn day, Hoping this new simmering love beyond fall, will stay. Written October 1, 2011 By Lee Ramage For Michael J. Falotico’s contest Falling in Love in the Fall Won 4th place
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Haick Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 8:25 PM
Congratulations on a deserving win in Michael's Contest, Lee! Love, Annalise
Falotico Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Such warmth and love in this excellent piece you have put together.... Congrats my friend..... always Michael
Maverick Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 4:27 PM
I see this write has done well Lee, as i would expect..Congratulations, and thank you for the comments.
Guzzi Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Just dreamy a real Hallmark moment I wish we could sell some of these! Congrad's Light & Love
Peranteau Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Lee, Autumn is my favorite season of the year and you expressed beautifully how I feel about this season. Its a shame it's such a short season. Love it!!!!
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Falling in Love in the Fall" contest Lee. Love, Carol
Puddifoot Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 6:25 AM
congrats on your contest win, that's a great opening line, really evocative of autumn :-)
Johnson Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:10 AM
Yes Lee its great the image on plate, red n brown leave incite, love in the night, a perfect sweet date, mate ...orright very well done here...
Ramage Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:14 AM
Thanks Don
Long Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 3:41 PM
this was a beautiful entry.. congrats on your win. free spirit
Ramage Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:15 AM
Thanks Free spirit!
Devonshire Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 2:16 PM
I agree with Barbara, Lee. This is surely one of the best entries. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Ramage Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:15 AM
Thanks Carolyn. Lee
Gorelick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 1:15 PM
I think this one is awesome..glad for your success in the contest. BG
Ramage Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:16 AM
Thanks Barbara. Lee
Minardi Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Congrats, Lee. I enjoyed it! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 12:02 AM
Congrats Lee on an outstanding win with this exciting and excellent creativity luv.. enjoy..
Johnson Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 4:41 AM
see it flow and how it was, sweet love it moves, and thoughts mind do cross, a great maifestation, of love....
Ramage Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 11:21 PM
Thanks Don. Lee
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