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Adorned with fall's first rain, Men of mystery Face each other. Heads tilted down, In the terse winds. Casual nods by necessity Their demeanor Is anything but calm. Faces fast losing color, Words never losing edge. 'Take down the root', one said. 'He's the one that matters.' 'But we'll die for sure.' 'What's the point, When we're fated for Death anyway?' Futile conversation persists As the hooded Looked on. He drew his weapon, Thinking their last thought: Leaves don’t talk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/21/2016 3:17:00 AM
- A great first poem Lingges Rao, welcome to Poetry Soup :) - I wish you luck and hope you will get much enjoyed by spending time here :) - :) from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2016 10:59:00 AM
Hey Anne-Lise, thanks for the welcome! Looking forward to read more of your poems too:)
Date: 9/19/2016 9:40:00 PM
Lingges Rao , Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2016 2:34:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Manmath! Will do:)
Date: 9/17/2016 11:52:00 PM
I like the way truth has to be identified in this. Well penned friend. :)
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:24:00 AM
Much appreciated, Sunita:)
Date: 9/17/2016 11:46:00 PM
M Linggeswar Rao,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:23:00 AM
Heya Linda, thanks so much for the welcoming words and heads-up!

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