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FALL Being out of doors Where lifetimes surround Where you now inhale Sense the beauty approaching That lovely lonely other Being out of doors Where the wind-blown clouds roam free Squirrels bury nuts Hardy birds puff their feathers Where sun has a soothing warmth You must be outdoors Summer’s children bid farewell Color rustle and dance Bid you come forth now pilgrim Join in prayerfully join in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2010 1:52:00 PM
Daver, you were right. Tennyson had bad eyesight and had to keep the words in his mind until someone could write them down for him! (at least when he was older) and yes, you got it right about the woman breakable, but more than that, emotionally not strong. well, I am in a rush, so later I'll read your older poems or try to find some! today hubbie is back from driving so I guess this is it for me today! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:28:00 AM
This one is very much in synche with the fall. I really enjoyed reading it and reading you comment to me on our adorable pets! A fun line, come forth now pilgrim! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:35:00 AM
My Prayers have been answered dear poet....for those fry an egg on mine head days to end ! The start of my favorite time of the year....WINTER in your write ! TY for this great poem Sir ! much love, james
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:56:00 PM
we have an indian summer today at 86 degrees. we nice after 2 inches of rain. I have got my vilin out and started practicing again. It is schreechy at best but I am improving.
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:39:00 PM
I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2010 9:07:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful Poem. You have sketched a very cool picture of nature with sounds of music and nature. “Being out of doors, Where the wind-blown clouds roam free' Great lines and beautiful imagination. I have placed a new Poem 'Mysteries of Human Hairs'. Hope you would like it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Daver Austin.
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Date: 10/28/2010 8:29:00 AM
Summer's children bid farewell..love that line ..Good to see a post from you..hope all is well..BG
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Date: 10/28/2010 8:28:00 AM
A joy to read you, daver with enchanting phrasing and gentle word usage.. nette
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