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Fall

                       Fall
                starts fresh
               with the dew
             in the morning
            a new transition
           from the summer
                for smelling
                new scents
                      once
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:49 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 10:02 AM
- Back with congratulations, Maria :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Thank you, Anne.
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 5:49 PM
Maria, Your ninette has such a relaxing feel to it! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 12:40 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. Have a nice day!
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:11 AM
- Fall ... a new transition ... ... a new goodbye to summer :) - Lovely ninette, Maria :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:08 AM
Thank you Anne..! Same to you with your Blackberries ninette. It's a nice one. Hugs..!
Rolland Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 3:58 PM
very subtle and emotionnal, like walking in nature at dawn, thanks a lot, thanks Maria
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Thank you Yann. You are such a nice french rose. LOVE
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