Fall

For as long as I can remember I've never looked ahead, I've always walked with my head down so I could place every step, I've often been too cautious to keep up in the race, and though I fell behind I've never fallen out of place, I've never held on to anything when I sensed any doubt and I've never let go of anything I couldn't live without, I've never shown a smile I thought could be turned to a frown and I've never stood up when I could've been knocked down, I've never given up my heart without the exchange of another and I'll never love care-free without the same from the other, Because I've always been too afraid to fall for all I had to lose I've always been too afraid to fall, except in love with you

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Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 10/30/2024 5:18:00 PM

Shane this poem was well written and heartfelt. It was sweet in the end, but also conveyed a very clear message that caution in everything was necessary. That's something I know well, in trusting the wrong thing or person. My favorite stanza flowed amazingly "I've never held on to anything when I sensed any doubt and I've never let go of anything I couldn't live without," It was good to read your ink!

Shane Thacker
Date: 11/1/2024 3:16:00 PM

Thank you, Jesse. I appreciate that you read one of my poems.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/19/2023 9:52:00 AM

Another terrific poem Shane. Best wishes from SV

Shane Thacker
Date: 6/19/2023 11:56:00 AM

You're right. Great catch. I can't believe I didn't notice that before posting it. Thank you so much, SV. I must head read it in my head even without seeing actually seeing the word. I've edited it now though.