Fake Mother

Glaring, daring him to stare into her eyes.
They’re stern, they burn terror of an evil kind.
His fibs, she twirls like a baton, his feeble lies.
This stepmother, a fairytale witch, finds

ways to wreak havoc when her husband’s away.
Elementary child, small but wise, inflames her,
releases creatures uncaged - she goes cray-cray.
As fake mother cracks, her vibrato bum concurs.

1/4/2020

From “Off With Their Heads,” by Maria Tater, in the oldest version of “The Three Gifts,” a boy asks that when his stepmother glares at him, “her bum might then let go, and crack like roaring fire.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/6/2021 7:28:00 AM
So much fun! Hilarious to me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! I appreciate you!
Date: 1/5/2021 10:08:00 AM
My first reaction was to condemn all step mothers but I soon realized there are many who love their siblings. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2021 10:09:00 AM
And this is but a fairytale witch. So many stepmoms and adopted moms love to the pinnacle of dreams!
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