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Faith Paved Road

Too much pain wrestles in my dark,
forcing limps that stifle my spark.
Trekking life's long and winding road,
I seek You for a faith reload.
Praising Your road paved with truth's seed,
I will find where pain does recede.

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2025

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Ann Foster Date: 7/4/2025 8:38:00 AM This was simply lovely... and touched a place in the dark that needed a bit of light... Ann Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/22/2025 2:44:00 PM I enjoyed reading "The Long and Winding Road" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.................. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/19/2025 8:01:00 PM 'a faith reload' sounds like just what the Good Doctor ordered. Neat turn of phrase there, CayCay. Flex those rosaries, gw Login to Reply

David Crandall Date: 6/19/2025 6:28:00 PM I like your choice of song, and the application of it in your poem. I can relate to life being a long and winding road. I hope that, through all the tears, etc. it will always lead you to where you need to be. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/19/2025 11:25:00 AM Great job with this one, my dear talented friend Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/18/2025 10:18:00 AM spirituality at its finest -- subtle yet firm, cay! Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 6/16/2025 8:17:00 PM Beautiful- in the "Too much pain wrestles in my dark" Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/16/2025 9:15:00 AM A sort of prayer everyone likes. My pain will not disappear easily though. Poetry hugs. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 6/15/2025 7:24:00 PM Dear CayCay, your prayerful poem is simply beautiful and deeply moving. The imagery is filled with emotional pain, longing and determination to "find where dark does recede. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 6/15/2025 12:23:00 PM So very beautiful- enjoyed <3 Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 6/15/2025 5:54:00 AM Yes, the long and winding road can lead us to our Maker, who only wants peace for us. Nice take on the theme Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 6/16/2025 8:52:00 AM some dude pictured on rice boxes, he was entering the poem, just as you were leaving, didn't you see him, sort of an orange smear? I was addressing you both in the same box, a hi and a bye. CayCay Tom Woody Date: 6/15/2025 9:44:00 AM Who's Ben? CayCay Jennings Date: 6/15/2025 6:47:00 AM Amen, Brother Ben! Good to see you, Tom. Poetry hugs ... CayCay