CayCay Godwin Poet Lay

Faith Paved Road

Too much pain wrestles in my dark,
forcing limps that stifle my spark.
Trekking life's long and winding road,
I seek You for a faith reload.
Praising Your road paved with truth's seed,
I will find where pain does recede.

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Ann Foster July 4, 2025 at 8:38 AM This was simply lovely... and touched a place in the dark that needed a bit of light... Ann

Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2025 at 2:44 PM I enjoyed reading "The Long and Winding Road" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..................

Gershon Wolf June 19, 2025 at 8:01 PM 'a faith reload' sounds like just what the Good Doctor ordered. Neat turn of phrase there, CayCay. Flex those rosaries, gw

David Crandall June 19, 2025 at 6:28 PM I like your choice of song, and the application of it in your poem. I can relate to life being a long and winding road. I hope that, through all the tears, etc. it will always lead you to where you need to be.

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2025 at 11:25 AM Great job with this one, my dear talented friend

Nette Onclaud June 18, 2025 at 10:18 AM spirituality at its finest -- subtle yet firm, cay!

Paige Hind June 16, 2025 at 8:17 PM Beautiful- in the "Too much pain wrestles in my dark"

Victor Buhagiar June 16, 2025 at 9:15 AM A sort of prayer everyone likes. My pain will not disappear easily though. Poetry hugs.

Susan Ashley June 15, 2025 at 7:24 PM Dear CayCay, your prayerful poem is simply beautiful and deeply moving. The imagery is filled with emotional pain, longing and determination to "find where dark does recede. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Paige Hind June 15, 2025 at 12:23 PM So very beautiful- enjoyed <3