Nette Onclaud Poet Pantoum

Faith In Tomorrow

Now  that the leaves turn amber  brown,
Memories  gather to unfold
On life's journey, its seasons’ crown;
As tomorrow rides … warmly bold.

Memories gather to unfold
When deep patience bestows time's flare
As tomorrow rides … warmly bold,
To nourish  joy beyond compare.

When deep patience bestows time's flare
Enshrining brave moments …aflame,
To nourish  joy beyond compare
With prayers of faith  in love’s name.

Enshrining brave moments …aflame,
On life's journey, its seasons’ crown;
With prayers of faith  in love’s name,
Now that the leaves  turn amber brown.



Contest: What Will Tomorrow Bring
Sponsored by Eve Roper   6/24/2017

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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer July 6, 2017 at 5:22 PM This is beautiful Nette. I have saved it as a favourite.

Mark J. Halliday July 5, 2017 at 7:51 PM A well-deserved win. Very nice.

Eve Roper July 4, 2017 at 8:08 PM A wonderful poem, Nette, perfect syllable count and flow, congratulations on your win ~*

Funom Makama July 4, 2017 at 8:50 AM Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..

Jeremy Smith July 3, 2017 at 9:30 PM Wonderful job on this great win :) Congrats!!

Rhoma Em June 24, 2017 at 9:50 AM The rhythmic flow and content are astounding,dear poet. I loved the offering of hope. The best to you!

Leon Datu June 24, 2017 at 9:38 AM Makes me believe in a bright tomorrow despite the struggles we have today. This is magnificent!

Augustus Black June 24, 2017 at 9:35 AM Hello! You write uniquely like a professional writer. How deep and touching this poem is.. so cool and so adorable. Great poem.

Heidi Sands June 23, 2017 at 6:41 PM A very well written smooth and touching Pantoum Nette! Good luck in the contest :)

Daniel Turner June 23, 2017 at 6:22 PM I've been waiting on tomorrow all of my life, nette. All I ever get is yesterdays. You have written a beauty for the contest. Good luck.

Winged Warrior June 23, 2017 at 6:11 PM Beautiful as ever nette...best of luck...and god bless my friend...^WW^

White Wolf June 23, 2017 at 6:04 PM Bonjour, Nette! Oh, I adore this write you have composed! Best of luck to you

Frederic Parker June 23, 2017 at 5:27 PM the road to tomorrow is paved with the bricks from yesterdays kiln...good luck in the contest, a beautiful poem, poet