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Fairy Tale Christmas Dream

I am 
just thinking of you fondly 
Hoping I bring a smile warmed inside 

It is windy I must admit to you 
who bring the sunshine love
Being honest I dream of cuddling up to you

Trying to visualise a feeling 
each time I see you 
my heart stops as you enter

Breathtaking beautiful lights up
I love holding your hands 
I feel they fit with mines perfect

When I look upon your smile 
light of One in a thousand angels 
holding a breathless moment 

Center stage spotlighting
Just In that single second 
my love for you is sealed

Kissed By the beauty 
of having you sweet Cinderalla 
holding the glass slipper in my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 20, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Hi Liam, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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December 19, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Beautiful write, Liam. Very tender and sweet....Romantic and light. These are the writes that I love best.
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December 19, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Hi Liam! Wow! Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet !So wonderful!Just amazing!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful! Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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December 19, 2015 at 7:12 AM
A tender, loving poem filled with warm feelings that leave no heart unmoved, dear Liam! Excellent! A seven. Have a superb Christmas!
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December 19, 2015 at 7:10 AM
- Really cute and romantic dreams, Liam - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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