Fairy Tale - Part 1

Raindrops on roses weren’t her thing. 
They were okay.

But patchouli and pine 
Curry and cloves 
Burnt orange dusks fading to midnight blue slumber 
Alto strings and reeds weaving symphonic tapestries in minor keys 
Woolen ponchos and leather boots and prairie skirts sewn from bandanas line 
dried for the hundredth time to soft perfection 
These were a few of her favorite things.

Depths of tone and texture 
Vast in richness 
Intriguing in complexity 
The labyrinth of wonder 
The land of the Prince.

He sought her out early in the season 
Just as the crocus bloomed 
In the exuberance that precedes 
Any need for discretion. 
Innocent, she held his hand 
Gladly following as he led her 
Spellbound though the sights and scents 
And sounds of sadistic nothings sweetly 
Whispered in her ear. 

So softly did he speak 
She didn’t notice when 
His voice replaced hers.

So slowly did he dim the lights 
She didn’t notice when 
The oranges turned umber 
The blues went slate.

So slightly did he turn the dials 
She didn’t notice when 
The harmony of the strings and reeds 
Changed to dull, discordant static.

So subtly did he administer his anesthesia 
She didn’t notice when 
The wool began to scratch, the leather tug 
The skirt tatter.

His seduction near completion 
Her will half a heartbeat from extinction 
With her next breath 
Her soul would be his.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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