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fairy lights-Lune Haiku

fairy lights
in jars of crystal
fantasy

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William Kelii Kekaula

November 15, 2023 at 12:56 PM

Awe, Kim, and with all of their possessive lights, I still can't find those buggers here in Hawaii, sigh. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues

November 15, 2023 at 6:22 PM

Aloha, William! :)

Linda Alice Fowler

November 14, 2023 at 10:33 AM

Thanks for the memories...they were always a big attraction at twilight in West Texas. :)

Kim Rodrigues

November 14, 2023 at 10:41 AM

:) Hugs

Bill Baker

November 13, 2023 at 3:52 PM

Very creative Haiku, Kim. I like what you came up with the jazz up the old lightening bugs in a jar thing. Have a jolly good day! Bill

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 4:08 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Paige Hind

November 13, 2023 at 3:28 PM

Enchanting. Enjoyed it!

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 4:08 PM

Thank you, sweet Paige!

Sam Kauffman

November 13, 2023 at 10:26 AM

What a delightful and enchanting Lune, Kim - like a slice of summer on a magic summer night! There is magic in your lines! If this is for a contest, best wishes for a win! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues

November 13, 2023 at 11:39 AM

Thank you, Sam! Blessings!