Audrey Haick Poet Haiku

Fairies Gala

Fairies Gala

Fairies waltz on branches of oak 
In cool, misty haze of morning dawn

translucent wings laced with fine golden strands
fluttering 'midst dense new leaves
glistening in sun light


dew-drenched knarled trees  
guard lush green enchanting place...
Kissed by morning sun

intruders
turn on
sprinklers

~*~
By A. Brigham
For Constance La France's "Nature 4 in 1 Contest"

Crystalline
Kimo
Haiku, 
Senryu

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Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2011 at 11:27 PM wowie, I had not seen this one earlier. and I am very happy to finally have seen it. Your words SOUND like fairies and the last part was SO fitting, it just really captured the moment of "intrustion" Congratulations, Annalise. Wonderful!

Kash Poet March 7, 2011 at 6:11 PM Wonderful write here Annalise!Congrats on yiour win ---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta March 7, 2011 at 1:34 PM Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Constance, Annalise

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 1:15 PM Annalise I love your "translucent wings" line.. congratulations on your win in Constance's contest.. love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2011 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 12:30 AM This was truly an awesome write dear Anna. Warm congrats

Harry Horsman March 6, 2011 at 10:47 PM This is awesome, Annalise, really like this. congrats. Harry

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2011 at 9:21 PM you rock, anna! love this gem of a piece... congrats for raking it high in the winners' roster! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire March 6, 2011 at 7:43 PM Magnificent description, Annalise. The last verse made me chuckle. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 7:26 PM Congrats Annalise on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with these rare and beautiful words my friend.. enjoy another grand win..luv..

James Fraser March 3, 2011 at 2:15 PM Loved this little story Annalise. Fairies make excellent writing material. Good luck in Constance's contest....:) smiles

Kash Poet March 3, 2011 at 7:47 AM Amazing write here Annalise!Love it!Goodluck in the contest--kashinath

Constance La France March 3, 2011 at 2:39 AM Thank you for supporting my contest.

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2011 at 11:44 PM A wonderful fantastical write, Annalise. Good luck in the contest.