Fair and Square Humorous Patter Sayings Poetry Contest

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Round up all them sweet wallflowers don't let them sit alone for hours! :( You're having fun-- I've got a hunch ;-P They're sick of watching, drinking punch

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2024 4:43:00 AM

LOL, got a chuckle at these - I'd definitely rather watch & drink punch than dance, though : )

Michelle Smith
Date: 6/7/2024 8:39:00 PM

For sure. :) I wrote this with young ladies in mind who ought to at least enjoy a time period of going to dances in fancy dresses, such as Patricia in "The Bells of St. Mary's." I myself gave up dancing a long time ago though. I like sitting alone for hours. Easier to read and write that way.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2024 4:12:00 PM

LOL…well said! Round em up!

Michelle Smith
Date: 5/29/2024 7:31:00 PM

hehe! ;-)