Fair and Market In Wales

Lost my kids once just for a  minute or so in the fair:  needle in haystack.
Busy and purposeful Sunday morning. Fascinating bee hive but I wanted my kids back

Thought they were next to the glass beads jostling and rattling on a necklace chain,
Or near the polished fossils, and bags clinking their sea-shell collections from Spain.
I squinted for their faces in the crowd,as rows of cheap eyeglasses looked invitingly  
Over at the gaudily-decorated casual shoes, just arrived breathless from Turkey; 
And stalls overflowing with flame-coloured dresses - Moroccan, from Agadir  -
Trying to inch down to the ground like wriggling children. But not my children dear.	

Toy insects buzzing joyfully and plastic windmills whirring playfully in the breeze
And serious-minded compasses busy seeking north didn’t fill my search with ease.   
Carousels with ponies and dinosaurs, birds and  elephants?
Maybe they had fulfilled my wandering kids’ secret wants?   

Noisy price-haggling. African traders switching from  language of Germany to Wales, 
Or even to Arabic, as they sensed customers's different interests and possible sales.
Chinese and Vietnamese comparing views in French, their only common tongue.
No doubt,  my three had slipped their leash and were hiding:  they were young.

The swish of the decorative paper garlands in the breeze was near-lost in the crowd;
And the  conflict between Welsh folk-music and American heavy-metal rock so loud. 
And  I listened to  the  colourful chatter pulsate 
Of  traders trying  to persuade money to leave your wallet.
Girls  in sandals and sunglasses. Old ladies in floral patterns and blue-rinsed hair.
Young men eyeing girls trying on dresses ……but my three were not there.

Ah  - but  then!  At the ice cream stall I saw three hungry mouths, kept 
Pressed to the glass.   Three  money-less  urchins all glad to see dad.  I swept  
Them  up  in my arms and started to relax and enjoy the fair-market.
I’d lost my kids for just about  one minute.

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Entered in Lisa Cooper ~Dark Poetess's Contest    County Fair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/27/2012 6:03:00 PM
Absolutely petrifying I'M sure!!! naughty! kids Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:13:00 PM
yesss, a mirage of scenes,KC...i'll give you my placement for a free ride to wales, lol... congrats!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:27:00 AM
Sidney congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/2/2012 7:18:00 AM
Sidney, I can see it all now, kids straight to the ice-cream, good luck..David soup mail
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Date: 7/1/2012 1:44:00 PM
i think we've all had that horrifying experience of "misplacing" our kids in a crowded place. you've described this so vividly i got lost in your descriptions and forgot to worry about your kids for a minute (although i knew they were safe), but that was the minute it took for you to find them! i enjoyed this poem very much...
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