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Failure,An Illusion

Failure!
null and void of life,
self confidence and mental strength impedes,
fear invites!
suspicion waters!
as rooted,
dilutes mental strength!
drives away self confidence!
inclusive growth,
illusion!!
as being has gone astray,
exactly, no skepticism,
 illusion!!
believe only illusion!!!
wholehearted acceptance,
paves the way for destruction,
instead
incline towards God!
believe,
reap positive force,
which,
generates self confidence!
powers mental strength!
dispels illusion!
indeed!, certainly!,
removes illusion!
success just by hard slog,
belief drives…
succeed.

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Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2013 at 10:49 PM thanks for your kind comment on my poem for India. Sure wish to see more posts from you.

Skat A July 1, 2013 at 10:08 PM JENISH, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3

Connie Gildersleeve June 28, 2013 at 2:29 PM Jenish congratulations on your fine win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi June 28, 2013 at 7:03 AM interesting conclusions! Light & Love

Audrey Haick June 26, 2013 at 6:11 PM Congratulations on your amazing win, Jenish! Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A June 26, 2013 at 4:23 PM Hello Jenish, I was amazed by your entry, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for having patients and enjoying my contest... sorry I took a week in posting the winners. I had much fun in closing my Encouragement / Inspiration contest. many poems helped touch the moment. take care and have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA

Donna Jones June 26, 2013 at 4:15 PM Very inspiring.. congratulations..

Carrie Richards June 26, 2013 at 2:25 PM It is indeed, an illusion, unless we acknowledge the possibility! What an inspiring poem this is....to encourage one to believe! Well done!!

Harry Horsman June 23, 2013 at 10:03 AM love this, awesome poetry i've just read....

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2013 at 5:18 PM I think this is rather inspirational. Nicely penned!

Jack Horne June 21, 2013 at 1:18 PM lovely free verse here, my friend

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri June 19, 2013 at 5:55 AM A splendid poem indeed! Yes we shud incline towards God as u put it poeticaly. I hope u read my latest too.

Kash Poet June 19, 2013 at 2:53 AM Very inspirational poem here by you.Enjoyed the read.

Nette Onclaud June 19, 2013 at 1:14 AM the transformation of your thoughts amazes me.. super fine write with emotive, victorious appeal!..:) thanks for coming around and hugggs!

Joyce Johnson June 18, 2013 at 10:47 PM Oh I am so glad you turned this around. Nice writing. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce