Fadoodling Do Do

Fadoodling

Vo dee oh doe past first base
Ride the rail!  Submarine race!
Rantum-scantum - all the way!
Fadoodling ~ Vo! Do!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Nice to see the winners' list with your name on it and also, see what everyone else wrote for the contest. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Hi Sara! Thank you for your lovely note of congratulations. It was such a fun contest and I am so delighted with my placement among so many whimsical and fun poems. Sending you many blessings!
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 1:42 AM
- Submarine race, sounds fun Sam :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you! I thought this was a fun contest that inspired so many creative and fun poems! Hope you are well! Sending you hugs and blessings! Always think of you as summer is approaching!
Miller Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Great rhythm, funny words and perfect for the contest, well written, congratulations
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Hi Terry! So good to hear from you! Thank you for your note of congratulations and your delightful feedback. Had such fun creating this little poem. Hopefully it brings a smile to those who read it. I am honored by its placement among so many cute and funny poems. Sending you blessings of joy and my gratitude!!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 9:05 PM
Having been in the Navy, loved the “Submarine race.” The line was: Let’s go watch the submarine races…mmmhmm aha! Congrats, Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:06 AM
What a fun contest theme, Kim! Thank you for this opportunity to share in the fun and thank you for sharing in the fun. So grateful for your placement. Sending you blessings of joy like the joy of this contest theme that inspired so many wonderful poems!
Empress Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Your take on this contest is cute and reads well dear samszy! Love this! How youv used “ fadoodling” and “ ranctum sanctum” excellent and so very creative of you. I think whichever form or theme you write on, you somehow nail it and this is no exception! Youv done a fun and adorable one! I think should do well in the contest too. Best wishes! Sending you light always! Hugs
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Hi Inky! I am deeply honored by your wonderful compliments. As often as I struggle to write on a particular theme, I am inspired by your support and feedback - a gift to be sure! Thank you so much. This was such a fun theme and after I found the word "fadoodling," everything just seemed to fall into place! Sending you blessings of joy like the joy of your friendship brings, sweet poet!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Very cute and fun to read, Sam
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Hi Andrea! Thank you for joining in the fun! Kim's theme certainly brought out the silliness. Nice change of pace! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings!
Slaughter Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:40 AM
I won't even begin to try to unravel this one, Sam, but I too love "fadoodling"...
Kauffman Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 3:01 PM
Just had to have a little fun! I loved the word "fadoodling!" Hope all is well. Blessings and happy St. Paddy's Day!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 12:35 PM
You had me at the title. A fun one for sure. All the best in the contest. Thanks as well for your kind visit and comment.
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Richard! "Argh," as Charlie Brown would say! I missed your wonderful feedback. Please forgive my very late response to your wonderful comments! Have to admit, this was a fun one to write and once I found the word "fadoodling," everything just flowed from there! So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing in the fun! Blessings to you!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 9:09 AM
Thanks, Sara! Need some silliness every now and again! Blessings and prayers!
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 11:48 AM
- Well done ... a fun one, Sam :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you! Was fun to write some silliness! Take care! Blessings and hugs!
Fisher Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 6:03 PM
Great title for the contest! Seems like you had much fun writing this.
Kauffman Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 8:21 PM
Thanks, David! It was fun. Thanks for sharing in the fun! Blessings!
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