Notes About The Poem

Fading Summer

through
thick fog
tall ship
in silence
gliding
autumn
on its
coattails



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 7:43 PM
I love it! Especially" gliding through the fog"!
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 6:17 PM
a gorgeous image on the end of this one!!
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Raven Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Love the imagery painted by your wonderful words Line. Autumn follows close. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. your friend....Mike.
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much, Vladislav, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:14 PM
I like these coattails the best! (So much better than the political ones).
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Thanks, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Kiser Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Great imagery here in a short Haiku; well done.
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Mcferran Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 8:13 AM
You've painted a majestic picture here, Line. Lovely! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Thank you very much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Bangalee Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 4:26 AM
tearing the vast chest of foggy smoke the tower bridge of ship is coming as the wings of shark......
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 4:44 AM
This is what I love about these short forms, the reader fills in the blanks and sometimes the result is a 3-D motion picture.
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