Fading Porch Light

Fading porch light lures with pale glow
a circling moth, dull-beige and bare.
As starlight ties vast sky in bows, 
I shy away from ruthless glare. 

Night holds secrets I’ll never know  
of bold ventures and starry-eyes 
of love; cast alone in shadows,
I cry. The fading porch light dies.   

Unwelcomed guest, the moth again
boasts of heights, flitting and spurring 
my desperate cries - through open
window, lifting higher, whirring.

Moth seeks light on wings now broken
forever gone, my dreams unspoken…   


Entered in Silent One's Sadness Contest, 2/9/17
Originally for Chopped II Contest, written 11/4/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lawless Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 4:15 PM
a very unusual and moving take on the theme and the first "moth metaphor" I have ever encountered. Congrats on your placement.
Krampe Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda.
Carber Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 7:59 AM
This is quite beautiful-- one of those rare poems one can fall easily in love with!
Godwin Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Such a poetic, poem - seriously, love the imagery and how it delivered the feel. Perfectly gray, and I did relate. Congrats on your 1st place! Poetry hugs, CayCay
Fraser Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Love how moths thinks lights are the moon. Delightful Sonnet Rhonda, I'll smile at the next moth at the back door light, James :)
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Excellent treatment of the theme, great job with a sonnet, smooth and eerie edge you done good Rhonda.
Mohn Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Just beautiful Rhonda...big congrats to you :)
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:01 PM
stunning sonnet Rhonda - many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:39 PM
WOW! Rhonda what a jaw dropping write. I loved reading it, just wonderful. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 12:04 AM
Very beautiful sonnet , Rhonda, but so sad, I felt in my own heart so much sadness and pain as I read it. A 7 from me! Good luck in the contest! :) love and light! xxxx D.
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