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Craig Cornish's Long Shadows Contest...7 Oct 25
Fading Of Shadows
It is the eighth hour of shadowy fog,
And she writhes on dampened sheets
with frozen anguish thawing minutes
weighed on jagged umbra of night's hoot.
Somehow, silhouettes of light
begin to kindle as
the bleak of hours mirror
her own disquiet from love's demise,
remembering faces of kin
smelling of tar and mint , knitting arms
flamed though morn's play,
then doused by ink of eve ~
all gone in a flash.
She quivers quietly hums her way
through the glass pane,
this time aware that she inhabits
life gently , slowly;
her long shadows of fear,
of abandonment, of venial sins
desecrating her newfound grip
of wholeness... not anymore.
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