Fading Light


Did you shine bright,
star bright,
in your brief sky of time?

Did you have a stellar afterglow
once you departed
and vanish like melted snow?

Did your life leave an indelible mark,
a blazing comet trail
in the all enveloping dark?

What composition did your death bring,
was it the same song
that a supernova sing?

Now that your light is fading away,
what magnitude was it yesterday?
Now that your light is dimming down,
will any residue of your life be found?

As your fading light
recedes into the dying night
Will your soul still keep burning bright?

Only God, who sees all, knows
whether He'll snuff out the light
still emanating from your soul

As your fading light
recedes into the dying night
Pray that your soul keep forever burning bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 10:09 AM
The thing about light is that it continues to travel long after it goes out. We are looking up at stars that have long ago vanished. You my friend are a bright star that continues to burn bright and your light will travel far beyond today.
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October 21, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Beautifully stated Freddie, carpe diem out of every moment and try to be the best you can be whilst you still have breath! :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Ty, Paloma. I try to seize the day for sure. Make it count y'know. Love the love. Stay blessed. Love you.
Gupta Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Very touchingly beautiful 'Fading Light' ...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Ty, Probir. Your love and support is very much appreciated, my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Wonderful poem RW. I love the combination, with the celestial world and the soul, well penned mate /|\
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Ty, Rick. I am so pleased that you know how I tried to present this poem. Very perceptive, my friend. Love the love you give. RW
Sands Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Nice. I like the line - a blazing comet trail.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Ty, Heidi. Your kind words are so appreciated by me. And you are a very talented poetess in my humble estimation. Much love to you, dear.
Hoffman Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Great analogy in your star/soul poem Freddie! Enjoyed! P & L~Che
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Ty, Cheryl. I get in a very spiritual zone sometimes, and this is what comes out of my pen. Love you, dear.
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