Fading Drumbeats

Long past war’s fading drumbeats 
And beyond the miasmic mists of time
Run undercurrents that displace peace 
And fancied futures hoped sublime.
Once staccato beats of war drums abate  
Far from war graves and their dead,
We find loved ones’ dismal fates 
And lonely lives now filled with dread.

Soldier’s sojourn in the dash dividing 
Dates on their eroding tombstones
Remind us that their lives, though exciting,
Ended not with hope but love unsown.
Once draftee’s dreams become forgotten 
And their past romances are long since lost,
All that remains is what God left them  
And scars they earned at frightful costs.

We too, wonder what will become of us 
And we hope to pass our test divine
Once life’s abating hoofbeats leave us 
And we’re enveloped by the fog of time.
Who will remember who we were? 
Who will proclaim, “I KNEW THEM WELL?”
Who will stop and silently ponder 
What our tombstone epitaphs fail to tell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 24, 2023 at 9:55 AM
An excellent poem that rhymes and flows so well..
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December 24, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Thanks for your kind words. For the past three years I have been developing my own poetic style (Jandre'), which is represented by 1) this poem, 2) the poem Vortex of thought, and 3) another poem entitled Deus Ex Machina, which I will post very soon. Your style is a more eloquent style and many of your poems are good to very, very good.
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