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Fading Beauty

Dying youthfulness, tired eyes; laughter lines, ripples on the pond, yesterday's forgotten dreams; Fading beauty drifts away.. forever to illume sweet memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/3/2012 10:59:00 AM
I love this... Beautifully written :)
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:05:00 PM
So concise and true. Lovely poem.
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Date: 1/12/2012 5:43:00 PM
so easy to relate to this...sighhhhhh
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:54:00 PM
Brian, wonderfully said with so few words. Nicely done, Greg
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:33:00 PM
As if looking into a mirror at the end of the day.....it is all there in those lines, but if we are fortunate,...the memory will, indeed, be sweet.
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:04:00 PM
Lovely poem Brian, many of us can relate to it, myself included, Elizabeth
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