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Written April 2 2026 for Ink Empresses contest titled Stars or Home

Faded Stars

Sometimes I follow faded stars
Lost lonely souls with jaded hearts
But brilliant minds indigo smarts
Full of wisdom despite their scars

The beautiful ones have stories
Some of victory of green glory
But personally I prefer the gory
Truth of failure to be less boring

Life makes you like a dog collar
Is strangling neck so tight you holler
Despite experience status as scholar
No matter your position in beauty parlor

For beauty is a burning boisterous blade 
that cuts two ways leaves you spayed
For others see you and miscalculate
The pain you have inside is dead weight

Yet there is a deadly denim denial
In creases of your courageous smile
They always tell you to be proud
To turn a bloody frown upside down

A faded star with a hole in red heart
Has adjusted to the irony and dark
Paths sarcastic laughs of lone sharks
Feeding on energy from the flower park

Not all pretty faces will win the rat race
Someone left behind must lead the way
For the rebuilding of the hearts that break
For the sacrificial lambs that find faith
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Anaya Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 10:03 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Karen! Ridding of "sarcastic laughs " is a start to a good heart. Faving
Jones Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 3:49 AM
Wow! I’m honored you fav it Anaya! Thanks so much!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 4:23 PM
Profound and so reflective. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 4:35 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Empress Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 8:28 AM
This poem shows that you have a beautiful heart, whether they are faded stars, with jaded hearts or not you see beauty in their complex mind and soul, and only few see through it all and appreciate all shades of one! This poem really moved me and i love the cadence and rhythm of it all! Absolutely love the flow and the depth of it all too. Thank you for sharing this with us. Congratulations on your placement! Sending you light always
Jones Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 8:49 AM
Your contests are always inspiring with great prompts or titles! Thank you for my placement and the honor of writing in YOUR contest!
Delegans Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 10:03 PM
This one is amazing, Karen. I was hooked the entire way thinking about life and the people you cross paths with. This is a fav for me.
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 1:01 AM
Wow! I’m honored that you fav it Christopher! Thanks for making my day!
Anaya Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Brilliant, i especially like "Truth of failure to be less boring" your touch of sassy frassy excites lol. Very compelling thoughts, done uber-well, KJ it should score hugely~ xX
Jones Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 3:01 PM
You are kind! Thanks Anaya!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Faded Stars" write. "Good Luck" Have a Beautiful/Blessed ~ Easter/Spring writing away.............
Jones Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Thanks Paula!
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