Fade Out

Get up ! Get up! empty eyes met mine, no more in him..the spark divine

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/3/2010 7:13:00 AM

wow i really like this one!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2010 6:53:00 PM

Powerful words to your Crystalline poem.. luv this form also... enjoyed your message... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/22/2010 7:47:00 AM

Yes indeed, powerfully sad.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2010 7:03:00 AM

Oh, that is a great visual, Brian, it reminds me of my dying cat. My only real encounter with death. LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2010 3:38:00 AM

No capital on divine. Question as to what spark? Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Anthony Nutter

Date: 1/22/2010 2:55:00 AM

Sad.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/22/2010 12:45:00 AM

So sad, capture the emotion just right.