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FADE OUT

Get up ! Get up! empty eyes met mine, no more in him..the spark divine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/3/2010 7:13:00 AM
wow i really like this one!
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Date: 1/22/2010 6:53:00 PM
Powerful words to your Crystalline poem.. luv this form also... enjoyed your message... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:47:00 AM
Yes indeed, powerfully sad.
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:03:00 AM
Oh, that is a great visual, Brian, it reminds me of my dying cat. My only real encounter with death. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 3:38:00 AM
No capital on divine. Question as to what spark? Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2010 2:55:00 AM
Sad.
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:45:00 AM
So sad, capture the emotion just right.
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