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Fade Away

This tear stained soul
   called out in pain
The day our pleasures
   fell like rain
Your softest touch
   my skin knew well
Now scars my heart
   with pangs from hell

Fade away Nirvana, fade away
Fade away Nirvana, fade away

Mournful thoughts cut
   like Blue North Winds
As I strain to hear
   your voice again
I've tried new words
   and sang our song
But a change of lyrics
   just seemed wrong

Fade away Nirvana, fade away
Fade away Nirvana, fade away

I miss the quiet
   spent at your side
With love, no one
   could make us hide
But now the noise 
   of less things said
Drowns out the hope
   that's left for dead

Fade away Nirvana, fade away
Fade away Nirvana, fade away


8/25/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/1/2020 4:52:00 PM
:( Charlie I'm sorry ...you seem so positive. It's uplifting to me :)
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Date: 12/1/2020 2:25:00 PM
Oh man Charlie sorry to hear about the surgeries :( Had one to the neck then two to the back last year. I feel your pain! Follow Dr's orders Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2020 2:32:00 PM
It’s my forth and last. This one has put me in a wheelchair forever. But it least it’s motorized. 61/2 mph, watch out, here comes Charlie
Date: 12/1/2020 1:36:00 PM
Oh wow Charlie... just wow. How have you been? :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2020 2:11:00 PM
Thanks FJ, doing much better now that I’m back home. I’ve had my fill of spine surgeries. Thanks so much for asking...
Date: 9/20/2020 5:24:00 AM
Fantastic lyric Pangie xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/20/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota...
Date: 9/2/2020 6:19:00 AM
A love like this may fade from sight, but it will never fade from the heart's memory. Beautiful lines, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/2/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Jenna...
Date: 8/31/2020 3:32:00 PM
Exceptionally crafted poetry my great friend. Sad and sweetly deep. Love the fade away refrain.. A jewel, and a great fav too.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Robert...
Date: 8/30/2020 3:58:00 PM
I miss the quiet spent at your side There is nothing I love more then a beautiful silence spent in the right company. Thank you for sharing Charlie, be well,
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Pixie...
Date: 8/26/2020 9:04:00 AM
oh this is sad, and you can feel it through your words and how you formatted it... deeply emotive... great poetry.. Hope you are well my friend. If it is personal, then please accept my condolences for your loss..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/28/2020 7:50:00 AM
Not personal SO, thanks...
Date: 8/26/2020 8:44:00 AM
Very touching Charlie, hope it is not personal, if it is my condolences, too many people dying lately.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/28/2020 7:49:00 AM
Not personal John, thanks...
Date: 8/26/2020 6:37:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem ... I feel deep longing :) - Nice to see you ... hope everything is well :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/28/2020 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, everything is wonderful...
Date: 8/25/2020 6:18:00 PM
Very nice Charlie, I like the beat of your Lyric poem.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Beldon...
Date: 8/25/2020 3:48:00 PM
wow, one of the better ones posted today. This is very poignant. I think I am giving my third FAVE today here.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 8/25/2020 1:33:00 PM
This is quite touching Charlie--the scene flashes in front of the reader (listener) in elegant rhythm of hearts. Lovely lyrics!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2020 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...

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