Faces of Loneliness

Some silences have many nooks of tears
That lay the corpse of angst upon old weeds 
As  grasses  hide a vulnerable face
To harbor grief...wrestling among lost stars.

And I hold comfort in my guarded  place, 
Ensnaring those who dare enter cracked walls
On threadbare hours... face of betrayal looms
While heart torn splatters, needing cold retreat.

Quietly wasting time that peels ached nights
I hang upon clotheslines of empty winds ,
Numbing the senses as I lose the spark of dreams 
Until tenor of pained silence roars...again.

Before an altar of thorns where love fades
On candles drifting to light my emptiness;
Nail of silence pierces this face now grim
Where bleeding hour reaches a destined tomb.



Loneliness Contest Of Frank H.
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 23, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Nette. awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:15 PM
congrats Nette...PD
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October 21, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Incredible!! Congrats on your winning placement, Nette! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, nette
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 6:54 PM
your words are always so perfectly penned upon the page and your images so beautiful...excellent piece Nette...congrats on your win :)
Carrillo Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:33 PM
Great poem, Congratulations. I enjoyed it very much... Lucilla
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Loosing the spark of dreams is the loneliest place to be...awesome poem nette...congratulations
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Congrad's on your verse winning, Light & Love
Mcdaid Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 3:56 PM
extremely beautifully penned piece
Jordan Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Nette, as always your poetry is beautiful and heartfelt, and quite sad in this case. But then that's the nature of the contest. You are quite an amazing writer... jack
Macmillan Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 8:56 AM
I have no idea what happened but I think both yours and Deb's po's for my Frida contest DID NOT get to me !!??? This is weird. And if I hadn't opened my new test, I'd simply reopen my old one, and you both could have re-entered my Frida one... awk! I've judged, but did not post the winners yet, as I want to work on my blog... I CRASHED into bed last night after making her lunch. Threw out my back, yesterday.... just a blah-ick day. This poem (above) RESONATES... echoes, you know? Yes,you do ;-)
Macmillan Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Hey, I will look for your entry in your po's... comment if I may on my blog? My contest page even LOOKS WEIRD... some of the ---> ' <------ have been turned into somekind of weird symbols. VERY ODD!!!
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 2:55 AM
Hi, my very dear friend Nette! So glad that I've passed by here this afternoon to read another amazing write of yours. Your very creative words perfectly portraits the faces of loneliness here my dear friend. A winner for me. Thank u so much for sharing! Good luck always! Thanks also for stopping by the other day. Was really worried about the weather/calamity there. Sorry 4 passing by just now. Our 2day seminar was just over. Thanks a lot for everything. Take care! love lots & big hugs, Leonora
Sivey Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 9:09 PM
Wow, this is a very deep and intriguing write my friend! I just love the way you interwove this poem, such a grandiose piece! I am certainly impressed with your extremely talented quill Nette! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Thanks Nette...I love the way you pause...consider and express what is good!
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October 17, 2013 at 6:28 PM
I like this Stanza: "Quietly wasting time that peels ached nights I hang upon clotheslines of empty winds ,Numbing the senses as I lose the spark of dreams Until tenor of pained silence roars...again" very beautiful.
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October 17, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Hi there Sweetie!!!! Only have a minute, but will be working on judging contest tonight... not myself, lots going on... but YOU have been in my constant thoughts since this afternoon, ever since I heard about the devastating storm that hit your homeland-- so good to see that you are okay!!!! and !!!! So sorry to hear of this tragic natural disaster... this poem haunts... those clotheslines tangle... Love sent, as always, I'm absent but you are never far from my thoughts! Hugs sent, dear friend
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October 17, 2013 at 4:16 PM
enjoyed this gem nette, good luck in contest,,,
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 11:27 AM
- Nette, this sounded very lonely and sad ...... I give you a hug :))) - Have a nice day, do not drink too much tea ...... - Wish you all the luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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