Hello There Poet Rhyme

Facelift

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Write me, tinker;
I’m falling apart.
Right me, thinker;
patch up this heart.

Stitch each seam 
with thread eternal;
mend ragged edges, 
remnants infernal.

Take what’s worthy, 
make it shine.
Fairly, justly, 
restore what's mine.

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Richard Lamoureux September 24, 2019 at 7:50 AM In reality it gave me a facelift because I left with a smile. ;0) Hello There September 24, 2019 at 4:56 PM Aw, shucks. Loved this comment <3

Sandra Adams September 23, 2019 at 9:22 AM I think we all need that mending at times... adore this one...nice inking HT :) hugs Hello There September 23, 2019 at 12:21 PM Good to know I'm not the only one ~ Thank you, Sandra :)

Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2019 at 8:46 AM I will go for one of those heart lifts, I think my face may be beyond repair. Cute poem with a meaning that is well below the surface. ;0) Hello There September 23, 2019 at 12:20 PM Lol. Funny, I've never been in the habit of adding a title to my written words. I'm glad you stopped by to see there was more than met the eye here <3

Pat Adams September 23, 2019 at 8:04 AM Awesome and clever I agree. Very well written and rhymed. You continue to amaze me! Well done!.....pat Hello There September 23, 2019 at 12:16 PM Thank you so much, pat <3

Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 8:04 AM Such a simple but enticing poem, seeking that which will help us in our moments of need. When we don't feel ourselves, if I read this right. :) Nicely done my friend. Hello There September 23, 2019 at 12:16 PM Yep, you sure did ;) Thank you, Chris <3

Vijay Pandit September 23, 2019 at 7:26 AM I like the clever use of words in your first stanza..and the tone of your poem throughout..confident! So well written, HT. Hello There September 23, 2019 at 12:15 PM Thank you, Vijay <3

Regina Mcintosh September 23, 2019 at 3:21 AM Awesome write. I wish you many more poems and blessings Hello There September 23, 2019 at 12:14 PM Thank you, Regina. That is a very kind thing to say <3